| REVIEWED BY FROST |
| "Justice" by Crystal Ordonez |
| Rating: 5 Swords Justice Crystal Ordonez http://www.lulu.com/content/1302525 Oct. 2007 An Ordonez Revenge Exclusive 45 pp. 5 Swords! Frequently good intentions do pave the road to a hellish life. Such was the case for Ray: all he wanted to do was to provide an assured good income for his wife and beloved son. Ray just happened to choose a well-paying field that landed him in hot water; he became a porn star, and an allegedly gay one at that. Yes, “Gay-for-Pay Ray” lost his teaching job, his marriage, and all access to his son, while still retaining the obligation to pay high child support fees. News does get around, as does gossip; and more folks watch porn than like to admit it. Soon Ray found himself loser in a string of jobs. What’s a good guy to do? Not commit suicide, as Ray’d considered; the better alternative is to simply wait. Justice may be delayed, but there are times in life when Justice will NOT be denied. Justice is an exciting and energetic short tale about a man whose life went all wrong simply because he wanted to do right by his loved ones. But as in all the Ordonez Revenge Tales, something’s gonna break, something’s gonna give, and Justice will roll into the picture with a vengeance. Kudos to Ms. Ordonez on this one, one of the best among many excellent stories! If you would like to be Reviewed by Frost, send an email to frost@jlfoster.biz or reviewed_by_frost@jlfoster.biz with the subject line "Submission." Include the author's name, title of book, publishing house, genre, page count, and an excerpt. |
